Chapter 8: Creating a Nation
Allie Altieri, Emilie Huang, Rebecca Meltzer, Deepthi Penta, Tyler Senackerib
You need consistency in your writing, format, style For example: you treat some of your commentary as sentences, ending them with periods ("."), while others are, apparently, to be considered something else (because they simply end, and have no punctuation). This is an unnecessary distraction. Edit! Proof-read!
Comments (3)
Emilie said
at 5:22 pm on Apr 30, 2008
Note: We made a decision to collaborate through email because we worried about technical difficulties with the pbwiki site.
Peter H. Bond said
at 10:50 pm on Apr 30, 2008
Should I assume that each group member is sending stuff to E - who is then getting it posted? Okay. Also, you might want to have your names (or initials, if your parents don't want your names posted) at the top- so it is clear who the authors/creators of this page are...
PHB
Emilie said
at 11:40 pm on Apr 30, 2008
Yes, I'm the one compiling everyone's sections from emails into one Word file and then copy pasting it onto here. It makes formatting neater. (:
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